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One Effective Story-Telling Technique

Red moon shines on a burning tree
Someone is taking my life from me
Where is my family, the light of my day
Someone has taken them all away

These words were penned by master songwriter, musician, and record producer Michael Omartian. (The song is “White Horse”, from the mid-70′s album of the same name.)

Great writers will often drop the reader right in the middle of action, or in this case, drama.

Some of the world’s most effective copywriters use the same technique. Here’s a representative example:

They Laughed When I Sat Down At The Piano, But When I Sat Down To Play…

In both cases, the writer goes on to engage the reader into the story. It’s almost like using a time machine to simply drop another person at a specific place at a certain point in time.

We often have a tendency to want to give all the background first, and then get on with the story… but in so doing, the reader often goes on to something else.

Copywriting Grammar: Why Your Copywriting Does Not Always Need To Follow Textbook English Rules

One issue that beginning copywriters often struggle with is realizing that good copy does not always need to follow the rules of grammar. Now there are always differing opinions on this issue, however the fact remains that effective copy often breaks the rules of grammar.

This is true because copy mirrors actual speech, and people do not always speak the way they write. In effective copy, we often see one-sentence paragraphs. We see sentences that omit the subject. Sentences sometimes begin with the word ‘AND’. The best copywriters will even frequently employ one-word sentences, or even one-word paragraphs.

Now when we point out these facts, it should not be assumed that copywriting can be sloppy. The exact opposite is true. Again, the best copywriters are careful with their grammar. They only break the rules for specific reasons, usually for emphasis. Copywriters at the top of their craft routinely study the standard works on writing, from Elements of Style by Strunk and White to On Writing by Stephen King. A good copywriter will pay attention to word selection, alliteration, and all the other elements associated with good writing. The very best copywriters read their copy out loud, usually several times, to ensure the smooth flow of words.

An appropriate comparison can be made to a professional athlete. Whether a baseball, football, or basketball player, the pro will often have his or her own style. Be that as it may, they first learned how to execute techniques by the book.

Ultimately, as a copywriter the only rule is whether the copy effectively generates the desired effect or not (leads or sales).

Email Marketing: A Quick and Easy Method of Increasing Your Autoresponder Marketing ROI

Email marketers, like every other types of marketers, are continually looking for ways to increase the profitability of their marketing campaigns. Here’s a simple method of doing that.

Many email or autoresponder management services have a special feature, namely, a warning screen a reader is taken to if they try to subscribe to your list twice.

Why would someone try to subscribe twice? The most common reason is… they are highly interested not only in the topic, but they are furthermore interested in what YOU have to say, and on top of that, they’re already signed up previously (but forgot).

Someone that has previously signed up and is wanting to sign up for your list again is very likely a good prospect. So, why not take advantage of an opportunity?

Besides, the warning screen is often rather foreboding and the reader is easily “put off” by it. Why create a problem where there doesn’t need to be one? Why not take lemons and make lemonade? Here’s a solution that will fix that problem and additionally increase your profits.

All you have to do is replace the default warning screen with an offer to buy something! You might even offer them a special deal, pointing out the fact they are already a subscriber. If you don’t want to sell them something at this point, offer a bonus or send them to your blog. Whatever you do, use the opportunity to promote your products and your websites.

Following these hints will explode your autoresponder and email marketing profits!

How to Make Your Copywriting More Effective

Anyone who writes copy, either for their own products or services or for clients, should want their copy to be more effective. This means more satisfied customers and more sales. How do you increase the effectiveness of your copy?

Here’s how:

Before you write one word, fix in your mind what you want to achieve with your sales letter or other promotional piece. Be specific. Don’t just say to yourself, “I want the reader to buy my product”. Instead, outline in detail what you want your reader to feel, experience, and ultimately gain from buying your product. You can even go further and put some kind of number on your desired outcome… how many sales do you want to make.

With this approach, you don’t have to concern yourself with sounding cool or making funny jokes in your copy. Imitating other sales letters is not your goal either. None of that is relevant to your goal! Everything you say and demonstrate is now focused on persuading the reader to buy your product.

For example, let’s say you are selling an information product on how to raise chickens. Should you include pictures of your children or grandchildren in your sales letter? Only if it helps persuade the reader to buy your product. Likewise, should you include fancy “Web 2.0″ graphics and “involvement devices”? If you determine that it will help you sell more product, then you should do so.

Do you research and test everything, always with your end goal in mind. This rule will help you decide what to do, and more importantly, what not to do in your sales copy.

Write Effective Email Subject Lines

One of the most important aspects to any email is the subject line. If it is not done right, you negate the whole reason for sending the email in the first place. In other words, you should spend as much time crafting a good subject line as writing the email itself, if you want the email to actually get opened, read, and acted upon.

Having a well-thought out subject line for your email is more important than ever. Here’s why.

First, people are wary of spam. Spam filters clear out most, but not all, spam. So as a legitimate email marketer, you want to avoid all appearances of a “spammy” email, and this begins, not surprisingly, at the very beginning.

Second, every good email begins with a promise… implying that the email is worth the reader’s time to invest a few minutes in reading. You may not know this, but most people scan through their email inbox and decide what looks most important. Most people never read all the emails they receive. By crafting a compelling subject line, you increase the chances your email will be read.

Third, even legitimate email marketers have resorted to “tricks” to get emails opened. While these may work in the short-term, in certain fields they have been used so often that readers tire of them. One approach that always works is to give the reader a taste of what they will get inside. There should be congruity between the email subject line and the body of the email, in the same way that a newspaper story headline should have continuity with the actual story. By avoiding “tricks”, you will stand out from all the other short-term minded marketers who use tactics without considering the long-terms effects of burning out their readers.

Email marketing can be a very effective medium for getting the word out to your prospects and customers, and the care with which you craft your email subject lines can make or break your email marketing campaigns.

Four Essential Elements in (Almost) Any Sales Copy

Four Essential Elements in (Almost) Any Sales Copy

Much has been written on the structure of a sales letter, and copywriters everywhere all have their own opinions about what must be included in a sales letter or promotion.

In this article, I will explain what I believe are the four essential elements of sales copy. Others may argue that other elements are essential too; however I believe these to be the most important.

1. The headline.

The headline is the most important element of any sales letter. Here’s why.

The headline qualifies the sales letter, and often serves as a screening device. The headline sets the tone for the entire letter. It must summarize what will follow without “giving away” too much. It must grab the attention of the reader and convince them to keep reading. If the headline does not do its job, the letter will not get read.

You can see why many copywriters spend more time on the headline than on any other part of the sales letter.

2. The offer.

What is being offered? If it’s not compelling to the reader… or not communicated in such as way as to seem compelling to the reader, the sales will be flat. The offer must be stated in terms important to the reader.

3. Testimonials.

Although there are exceptions, generally testimonials are going to be a very important piece of the building we call sales letters. There’s an ancient saying that goes like this: “let another praise you and not your own lips”. People today, just like people of times gone by, tend to be distrustful when others praise themselves. Testimonials break though much of the natural aversion and allow our satisfied customers to speak on our behalf.

4. Handling objections.

This element goes by different names, and here is how it works. If we were to sell our product or service in person, most of our prospects would have various reasons for not making a buying decision. If we are to persuade them to buy, we must answer those objections.

Selling in print is no different, and reality carries more importance for meeting objections than face-to-face sales. The reason is simple: as copywriters, we will not have the opportunity to answer our prospects’ objections individually. We must therefore proactively predict their objections and meet them head-on.

Summary

I am fully aware that these four elements alone do not a sales letter make. However, the copywriter would do well to spend the majority of time on these particular elements. They will “make or break” the sales letter. The business owner can make the process much easier by collecting good testimonials and by creating excellent products that his or her target market is actively seeking.

The Copywriter’s Job

Business owners often wonder: what exactly does a copywriter do? There’s no secret to it. The copywriter’s job is to persuade your readers to take a desired action.

The copywriter we speak of here might be you (the business owner), a staff copywriter, or a freelancer that you have hired.

The desired action may be to buy your product or invest in your service offering; however it may also be to download a free report or software application and provide their name and email address in exchange. Whatever the offer, the copywriter gives the the prospect or prior customer two or more options and asks them to choose.

What is really going on here? We might sum it up as: persuasion. Be aware that this “persuasion” is simply not what people often think. It is easy to assume that copywriters employ “tricks” to coax people out of their money. Consider looking at it this way instead: comptent and ethical copywriters utilize copywriting techniques for the purpose of convincing the reader to act in their own best interest… to do what they would anyway if they “had all the facts”.

What kinds of actions do we wish to persuade our readers to take?

The most basic action, on that requires the least amount of skill, is to simply to persuade another to take some action indicating their interest in a subject. That action might be as innocuous as reading an article. Or it may be downloading a free report or software program.

Next in difficulty would be convincing that same person to provide their email address in order to get the freebie. Web surfers today are hesistant to give strangers their email address online. The good news, if you can get people to do this, it usually tells you three different things. First, it shows you did a good job in targeting the right audience for your freebiew. Second, it tells you that you are speaking in their language. Third, it finally indicates that you are offering an item that they deem valuable.

You might rightly imagine that to persuade that same prospect to spend money is on another level of difficulty. And you would be correct. Ultimately, though, we are in business to make sale. In crafting a sales letter, the copywriter is merely presenting one type of a sales presentation.

The basic process is this: describe what is being offered, the benefits derived from the service or product, provide answers to the most common objections prospects have, and tell them how to buy. Throughout the entire process, the writer must use terminology familiar to the prospect and also remove any “speed bumps” (unnecessary or poor-worded phrases which will cause the reader to disbelieve what you are saying or even stop reading).

Smart marketers know that persuasion does not end when the buying decision is made. Not at all. The prospect must now be persuaded to type in their credit card information and then to confirm the order. After the order is made, customers commonly experience what is known as “buyer’s remorse” and so experienced marketers employ ethical tactics to show that the customer made the right decision.

The copywriter’s job is an essential one today. As a business owner, you may decide to write the copy yourself, or you may choose to hire a writer who specializes in writing copy for clients.

Joel Comm Leaves Amazing Testimonial for Darrel Hawes!

Joel Comm

“Darrel was recommended to us by a trusted friend in the internet marketing industry. We used a team approach on this project and found Darrel to be easy to work with and flexible.

The final copy converted very well for us and the book we were promoting “Click Here To Order: Stories of the World’s Most Successful Internet Marketing Entrepreneurs” reached #16 overall on Amazon! Thanks Darrel!”

Are You a Dork?

Thought provoking post over at CopyBlogger.com:

http://www.copyblogger.com/dork-copy

Some great tips on injecting enthusiasm into your copy. Worth a read!

Ray Edwards Leaves Testimonial For Darrel

If you don’t have time to watch this short video, here is the text of Ray’s comments:

Ray Edwards

“Hi! This is copywriter Ray Edwards. You may know me because I have written copy for some of the top online marketers, and I have on occasion hired copywriters to write copy for me for some of my projects.

That list of copywriters is very short. And the list of copywriters that I have hired once and will hire a second time is unfortunately even shorter. And on that very short list of copywriters that I would recommend to my friends is Darrel Hawes.

Now here’s what I can tell you about Darrel. He knows how to write copy that gets results. Part of the reason is he has taken my copywriting training, he’s a student of mine so he’s learned my system for writing copy.

Secondly, he’s very conscientious about deadlines, he’s never missed a deadline for me and I am confident he’ll have the copy turned in on time for you as well.

And the third quality about Darrel that makes him unique, is that he will continue to keep working with you after the first draft is turned in to make sure that the copy is everything you wanted the copy to be in the beginning.

So I can’t think of a stronger recommendation to give you for Darrel Hawes except this one:

I’ve paid him money to write copy for me in the past, and I will pay him money to write copy for me in the future.”