“I was lazy and wanted someone else to do my thinking…”

I hired Darrel because I was lazy and wanted someone else to do my thinking.
To be honest, I didn’t expect much – but I was *blown away* with the endresult!

Each email was well written, very persuasive and the perfect length. Each email
flows within the autoresponder sequence, and they educate and agitate. This
is exactly what I wanted, and something I could never have done myself …

Now I can rely on my backend autoresponders to close the sale, even if my
main sales page is not strong enough. I can only imagine how many extra sales
this will bring in, and I can highly recommend his service. If you are thinking about
developing a product, or if you’re unhappy with your current conversion rate – then
hire Darrel today.

This is an investment in your business, and a strong autoresponder series
can pay for itself time and time again. You won’t regret it …

Thanks,
Jonathan Regan

A few kind words from Janine Sotelo and CommSYS

Darrel,

My husband and I met you at Perry Marshall’s auto-responder seminar in
September ’08. I’d searched my office for your business card since
January and finally found it and contacted you for a copywriting
project.

We hired you to write a white paper, optin page, and follow up
autoresponder series to promote our software product.

Everything looks GREAT!! I’m really happy about how this project turned
out.

As a whole, everything is really well done.

We really appreciate your help on this project… we’ve given a lot of
thought to the white papers for several years now, but somehow you
managed to give it a good overall perspective and make it more dynamic.

I would be very interested in working with you on more projects… You
have a very well thought out process, and it has made it very easy for
us to work with you on this project.

Thanks again for all your hard work on this project! We really
appreciate it!

Janine Sotelo, CommSYS LLC

Ben Clemons comments on his copy critique

I am amazed this hasn’t sold out already. Darrel is very professional and knows his stuff! This is a steal for $47, and definitely a “no-brainer”. Thanks for the awesome copy critique!

Ben Clemons, http://www.photoshopactionscripts.com

Many copywriters would charge anywhere from $197 to over $1,000 for a video critique of your site. I’m still honing my chops in the critique department, so I don’t charge quite that much yet.

For most online marketers, one additional sale from the changes I recommend would more than cover your investment.

I’m not going to be offering the $47 critiques for long, so if you want one at that price, head on over to the Warrior Forum:

Copy Critique by Darrel Hawes

Testimonial from David McGimpsey – SpeakJapaneseFast.com

I recently performed a website critique for David McGimpsey, and this is what he had to say:

“Hi Darrel, I think this is perhaps the best money I have ever spent. You introduced me to some copywriting secrets that I would never have thought of. The video critique is clear and contains enough detail that I can start testing straight away. I’ll keep you updated on my progress. Thanks a million! David McGimpsey” – http://www.SpeakJapaneseFast.com