Four Essential Elements in (Almost) Any Sales Copy

Four Essential Elements in (Almost) Any Sales Copy

Much has been written on the structure of a sales letter, and copywriters everywhere all have their own opinions about what must be included in a sales letter or promotion.

In this article, I will explain what I believe are the four essential elements of sales copy. Others may argue that other elements are essential too; however I believe these to be the most important.

1. The headline.

The headline is the most important element of any sales letter. Here’s why.

The headline qualifies the sales letter, and often serves as a screening device. The headline sets the tone for the entire letter. It must summarize what will follow without “giving away” too much. It must grab the attention of the reader and convince them to keep reading. If the headline does not do its job, the letter will not get read.

You can see why many copywriters spend more time on the headline than on any other part of the sales letter.

2. The offer.

What is being offered? If it’s not compelling to the reader… or not communicated in such as way as to seem compelling to the reader, the sales will be flat. The offer must be stated in terms important to the reader.

3. Testimonials.

Although there are exceptions, generally testimonials are going to be a very important piece of the building we call sales letters. There’s an ancient saying that goes like this: “let another praise you and not your own lips”. People today, just like people of times gone by, tend to be distrustful when others praise themselves. Testimonials break though much of the natural aversion and allow our satisfied customers to speak on our behalf.

4. Handling objections.

This element goes by different names, and here is how it works. If we were to sell our product or service in person, most of our prospects would have various reasons for not making a buying decision. If we are to persuade them to buy, we must answer those objections.

Selling in print is no different, and reality carries more importance for meeting objections than face-to-face sales. The reason is simple: as copywriters, we will not have the opportunity to answer our prospects’ objections individually. We must therefore proactively predict their objections and meet them head-on.

Summary

I am fully aware that these four elements alone do not a sales letter make. However, the copywriter would do well to spend the majority of time on these particular elements. They will “make or break” the sales letter. The business owner can make the process much easier by collecting good testimonials and by creating excellent products that his or her target market is actively seeking.

The Copywriter’s Job

Business owners often wonder: what exactly does a copywriter do? There’s no secret to it. The copywriter’s job is to persuade your readers to take a desired action.

The copywriter we speak of here might be you (the business owner), a staff copywriter, or a freelancer that you have hired.

The desired action may be to buy your product or invest in your service offering; however it may also be to download a free report or software application and provide their name and email address in exchange. Whatever the offer, the copywriter gives the the prospect or prior customer two or more options and asks them to choose.

What is really going on here? We might sum it up as: persuasion. Be aware that this “persuasion” is simply not what people often think. It is easy to assume that copywriters employ “tricks” to coax people out of their money. Consider looking at it this way instead: comptent and ethical copywriters utilize copywriting techniques for the purpose of convincing the reader to act in their own best interest… to do what they would anyway if they “had all the facts”.

What kinds of actions do we wish to persuade our readers to take?

The most basic action, on that requires the least amount of skill, is to simply to persuade another to take some action indicating their interest in a subject. That action might be as innocuous as reading an article. Or it may be downloading a free report or software program.

Next in difficulty would be convincing that same person to provide their email address in order to get the freebie. Web surfers today are hesistant to give strangers their email address online. The good news, if you can get people to do this, it usually tells you three different things. First, it shows you did a good job in targeting the right audience for your freebiew. Second, it tells you that you are speaking in their language. Third, it finally indicates that you are offering an item that they deem valuable.

You might rightly imagine that to persuade that same prospect to spend money is on another level of difficulty. And you would be correct. Ultimately, though, we are in business to make sale. In crafting a sales letter, the copywriter is merely presenting one type of a sales presentation.

The basic process is this: describe what is being offered, the benefits derived from the service or product, provide answers to the most common objections prospects have, and tell them how to buy. Throughout the entire process, the writer must use terminology familiar to the prospect and also remove any “speed bumps” (unnecessary or poor-worded phrases which will cause the reader to disbelieve what you are saying or even stop reading).

Smart marketers know that persuasion does not end when the buying decision is made. Not at all. The prospect must now be persuaded to type in their credit card information and then to confirm the order. After the order is made, customers commonly experience what is known as “buyer’s remorse” and so experienced marketers employ ethical tactics to show that the customer made the right decision.

The copywriter’s job is an essential one today. As a business owner, you may decide to write the copy yourself, or you may choose to hire a writer who specializes in writing copy for clients.

Perception and Opportunity

Been thinking alot lately about the state of our economy and what opportunities lie therein.

Yes, things could be better. There are problems that need to be “sorted”.

But think about this:

The average person – that means you and me – can do nothing about the banking crisis, the credit crisis, mortgage crisis, and so on. We can talk about these very real problems for hours on end and it won’t change anything. We can point our fingers and find blame. Maybe there’s a time to do that.

Answer me one question:

When we finally and completely place the blame for our economic woes, will your situation change at all? I thought so.

If you want your life to be different, you are the most important factor in making it happen.

For those of us in business, success boils down to one thing, really:

Finding out what people want, and giving it to them.

We want to make it too complicated!

I’ve been working with some very successful people lately, and believe me, they aren’t talking about how bad the economy is. But… their competitors are!

See, people are always buying. The question is: are you making a strong enough case for why they should be buying from you?

So much of what we do is built around perception. And therein lies opportunity for those wise enough to take appropriate action.

What Recession?

Great video by Mark Joyner:

The Most Dangerous Belief! (A Rant)

I couldn’t believe what I was reading…

While strolling my local Borders bookstore recently, I flipped through a copy of Jim Wallis’ book:

The Great Awakening: Reviving Faith and Politics in a Post-Religious Right America

I’m not going to link to the book… because I’m not recommending you buy it.

Now don’t tune me out! This is not a rant about religion or politics (we can have that discussion, or a series of discussions, some other time).

Instead, it’s about belief.

    What we believe about ourselves and our place in the world.

In his book, Wallis made the point that in the United States, if you work hard, you shouldn’t be poor. He then went on to champion certain political policies to address the problem.

Three questions:

  • Who defines work?
  • Who defines hard?
  • Who defines poor?

At some level, we can all agree with his comment. I mean, who is really “for” poverty, anyway?

No sane person likes to see other people suffer.

The problem is this…

There’s an unstated assumption behind Wallis’ statement:

Someone else is to blame for my problems. I am a victim. I am not responsible for my place in life.

Do the above statements describe you and your belief? If they do, I sense danger! And you should too.

If you’re unhappy with your circumstances, look in the mirror and blame the person you see first. :)

Others may have contributed to your problems, but you are the driver of your life.

BUT THERE’S GOOD NEWS TOO!

You also have the power to change! No one cares about your life more than you do. You can bring about the results you desire, if your belief is strong enough.

Those who tell you “it’s not your fault” are lying to you, and even worse, their ideas will keep you from making meaningful progress.

After all, if “it’s not my fault”, then I don’t have to change.

But if I take responsibility for my decisions and actions, there’s hope. And I’ll be in the best position to seek out help in overcoming my obstacles.

See, we all need help! “No man is an island”, sayeth the poet John Donne.

The question I have is: are you looking for help in solving specific problems, or are you looking for someone else to solve ALL of your problems?

If you choose the latter, it’s probably “safer”. And you’d be in good company. And you’d have someone else to blame if things don’t work out.

If you’re looking to target blame on someone, there are many options to choose from. Take your pick. Your friends, ex-wife, parents, employer, or even the government. You’ll always have an “out”.

ON THE OTHER HAND…

If you’re ready to stop being a “victim”, there are plenty of people who are willing to help you.

Look, I can’t change the world… but I can help and encourage a few people along the way.

If this post resonates with you, please leave a comment below and let me know. Or if it just makes you really mad, you can let me know that as well.

Just know that as my reader, I care about you and want you to achieve whatever you want in life.

Bob Bly on Helping Prospects “Get” What You Do

As he says, many times we stumble when giving our “elevator speech”… a short summary of the work we do.

Bly – a master copywriter – suggests breaking it up into three parts:

1. Start with a question, one relevant to the person you are speaking with. Always start with “Do you know how…”
2. “What we do is…”
3. “So that they…”

If you do this, if the person is a good prospect, they will start asking questions and may become a new client.

Let’s analyze this in more detail.

The first part: I believe what is happening is simply “framing”: it’s shifting the focus onto your prospect and their hopes, dreams, and problems.

The second part: reminds them of a specific pain they have.

The third part: shows how you can fix that pain.

The Unknown History of American Business

Want to take a break from marketing?

Check out this book entitled:

Enterprising Americans: A Business History of the United States.

This book by John Chamberlain is a fascinating read.The Enterprising Americans

If you want to download it free (completely legally), reply to this thread and I’ll show you how.

Excel Spreadsheets for Calendar, Budgeting, + much more

I went looking for simple Excel calendar spreadsheet. Sure, I could build one (have built many, in fact) but there were specific features I wanted and was looking for a shortcut.

Found this site:

http://www.vertex42.com

Fantastic site!

In addition to calendars, there are budget spreadsheets, amortization schedules. Really quality stuff, the kind of spreadsheet I like to build (functional but look good too).

As far as I can tell, they are all free.

Daily Planner Conundrum

Maybe you can relate.

I have gone shopping for daily planners many times, and usually end up using something I create myself.

The commercially available options either have too many features, or not enough, or the format just doesn’t make sense for the way I work.

If that sounds familiar, this site may be just what you need:

http://www.diyplanner.com

Indescribable?

I’ve been wondering…

What kind of word is “indescribable”?

How can you “describe” or explain some by saying you can’t describe it?